a lingering scent of crushed flowers;
the crumpled pieces make a noise so surreal;
the seed of the love died even before growing;
the deafening wails silenced by the muted fears;
such is the agony of a broken heart; dying to live and living to die….
All it takes is time and efforts, and many a times it is all people crave for and don’t get.
Just added, good post miss.
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Sigh. It’s hormones, honey.
That’s all it is.
❤
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Good and lovely post. We think in terms of mending the broken heart, whilst God thinks in terms of giving us a new heart in place of the broken one. Thanks for the very nice post.
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i am so glad you liked it.. 🙂 thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts here
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Quite welcome dear
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Welcome! And what a strange coincidence: I was just contemplating your registry wondering if this might be a ‘dead profile’? I was so close to deleting it, and there you were!
Hope you like what you find. <More than 5 700 picturte – all 'full screen' are waiting for you!
Please enjoy!
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haha… yeah not been active and a little busy.. hope to be consistent now 🙂 and I loved what I found
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I am really surprised how many people are suffering from heart break
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well yeah.. unfortunately it has become an inevitable part.. wish we all were a lil respectful and empathetic towards emotions..!
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I guess world is over emotional
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we don’t have control over emotions.. do we..!
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Psychologically yes
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then may be need to learn 🙂
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Everyone should
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Touching write.
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thank you 🙂
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So nicely written , a matter of heart after all! Thank you for reading my posts n the follow , Nice meeting you , Good times!
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pleasure is all mine 🙂 thanks to you too
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Hello. Thank you so much for following me. I am now doing the same for you. Look forward to reading more of your work. Not too many broken hearts I hope. Kris.
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thank you so much 🙂 yeas hopefully not much broken hearts 🙂
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The last line “Dying to live and living to die” sums up all you wanted to say. 🙂
Heartbreaks, yes they happen. Feeling emotional and sad when a heartbreak happens is nothing bad. We don’t need to control these emotions. It’s what makes one different others. It’s inherent to one’s nature. Some don’t give any or much heed to emotions while some give a lot of heed to them. 🙂
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Most of the heartbreaking verses are heart touching but you write beautiful.
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thank you so much.. 🙂 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Lovely poem! How true those feelings are! So happy they don’t stay but last only for a while!
Thanks for stopping by my blog and for following!
Peace, Tamara
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and thanks for doing the same tamara.. 🙂 will read your work very soon… 🙂 and glad the post resonates with you.. 🙂
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You Are fine poet, You convey all the pain of a broken heart. So beautifully. Time will tell… You will feel renewed soon. You just need to focus on whatever makes you feel better. If you have things that you love to do, do that. Love anything that gives some pleasure to you, anything that gives back a reward. You’ll forget the pain and your heart will be a brand new one.
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thank you so much.. 🙂 loved your optimistic views.. thanks for sharing.. 🙂 will definately keep them in mind.. 🙂
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😄💙
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Wow. This is perfect Krati. ❤
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thank you so much shreyaa… ❤
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Great first line!
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thank you.. 🙂
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