Oh surreal sunshine, Find my way
For blurry eyes brimmed with tears of despair
Lost in the maize can’t find you..
Dusky paths full of dry leaves susurrating covet you;
Give life to the now dead spirit.
The castles have now shattered for the caliginosity rendered them
Scattered.
Oh shimmering sunshine..
Spread your light; extirpate the doomed dusk
Break the daunting darkness; revive the drained soul
Oh limpid sunshine
The flowers are being crushed and they now mourn the catastrophe
The trodden path laments it’s loss..
grief sticken and wretched it is being asphyxiated by the hands of fate
give it the purpose; bring in thy light.
Oh reverent sunshine; find my way.
“Break the daunting darkness; revive the drained soul.” I also love how you honor obscure terms in the context of your penetrating poems.
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and I love how you read and honor every word of my feeble effort to write 🙂
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Hardly feeble!!! Your efforts are very gratifying to this reader. Keep on!
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thank you so much 🙂
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Just beautiful. 🙂❤️
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Very nice post. I thoroughly enjoyed it:)
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thank you so much for reading 🙂 🙂 glad you liked it
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You’re most welcone
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This is so beautiful!
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thank you 🙂
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Don’t know how but this reminded me of Wordsworth, and I love Wordsworth. 🙂
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OMG..!! you made my day… seriously.. daffodils by wordsworth is my fav poem and he is my idol.. 🙂 thank you sooooo much 🙂
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Hai na? I knew it ki tumhe bhi pasand hoga Wordsworth. And don’t thank me! You deserve every word I said and much more. I’ll make sure some of my friends read this.
And “Daffodils” & “The solitary reaper” blew my mind when I was in school.
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ohh yeah… Like I remember these poems and definitely it takes me back to the cbse curriculum of junior classes.. 🙂 nostalgia much..!!
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“The Seven Ages of Man”, “Ode to the west wind”, “Lord Ullin’s Daughter”, “The road not taken”.. These adorned the schooldays!
Now, I’m nostalgic! 🙂
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ohhhh yeaaah… 😀 😀
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