It empties you like a ghoul has suck all life and the only thing left is the few lifeless pieces and you spend the rest of the time joining them in a hope that one day you will complete the puzzle with the only few pieces you have.
It is the labyrinthine emotions that haunt you; render you sleepless; make you feel numb to the sensation of spring after enduring fall for the eternity.
it was all you have and you gave it to the undeserved or perhaps you thought that the sky and sea can meet but you forgot that the horizon is a sham.
You played with fire in a hope to brighten your world. But it rendered it charred and dingy.
You gambled your heart- the most priced possession in a game where victory was implausible.
You loved and craved for the stars despite of knowing that few things can only be admired from a distance; if you go near, it can leave you smashed.
It is the umpteen number of times you tried to move on; you tried to run away with all the strength you have but a cryptic force pulls you back to the abyss and you; you feel hapless.
Sleep perhaps becomes your best friend and dreams your soulmate. Because that is where you see the two incongruous ends meeting.
Beautifully potrayed emotions in lovely wordcraft๐
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thanks a lot prashantt ๐
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Lovely. You portrayed all your emotions so beautifully. Love can be the best yet worst thing. ๐
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Once again,Krati you nailed it! ๐๐๐ Beautiful! I hope you are not heartbroken,and a prey of unrequitted love.Are you?
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I kinda was falling into one… But I moved on now pratishtha… this one I wrote a month and a half back… but it’s okay.. time heals.. ๐
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Ouch.I hope you are fine dear.Time would heal,yes.But the scar doesn’t really vanish completely.Heartbreak is a dangerous thing but its completely futile to cry over someone who didn’t care.We must learn to remember the past with a smile and look forward to a better future! You are one beautiful woman and you deserve the love that is truest of all,you will find it eventually.Lots of love.๐ Stay strong and never give up on love!
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thanks a lot my sweet and inviincibe strong lady.. :* you talk so much wisdom, that it’s almost hard to believe that you are still a teenager.. ๐ thank u so much for this pratishtha.. ๐ made me smile.. much love.. !! will keep in mind whatever you said ๐
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Really really good,especially those last lines, quite touching๐
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thanks for reading and sharing your views .. ๐ ๐
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I am in love with your words.
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aww… thanks a lot anagha ๐ that’s so kind of you to say that ๐
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you are amazing dear….I was a bit busy and missed reading your works
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same here.. catching up on missed posts ๐
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You’re too good with words Krati. ๐
Beautifully written. ๐
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thank u sooo much sumit.. ๐ ๐ hearing feedback from you is always a pleasure.. ๐
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Thanks for following my blog. Thanks also for creating and maintaining such a wonderful blog yourself which I’m now following. This composition reads very well and has a touch of poetry. It is so well written, and so deeply and comprehensively touching that one wonders if any effort has been made to publish elsewhere, at least some of your material.
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thanks to you too for following and taking the time to read. ๐ it means a lot.. I’m really glad you found my work good enough.. it’s a huge compliment for a novice like me.. ๐ thank you so much edward. great to connect with you
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Lovely
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thank you.. ๐
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Your usage of words. You wrote so well. โค
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usage of words is actually an art I’m trying to learn from an accomplished writer like you.. ๐
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Aww!!! That’s so kind of you. โบ But believe me, you are so good at it. โค
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shreyaa… you’re a sweetheart.. thank u.. ๐ ๐
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Unrequited love’s a bore, yeah
And I’ve got it pretty bad
But for someone you adore, yeah
It’s a pleasure to be sad…
‘Unrequited love’ – sounds kind of old-fashioned, doesn’t it? It conjures up scenes of 18th-century folk wandering around misty moors, composing poetry, passionately yearning for the merest glimpse of their beloved. Infatuation, longing, and love can be agonizing when they remain unreciprocated; when the focus of your love sees you as ‘just a friend’ (or not even that). Unrequited love can hurt like @#!*% .
Profoundly inked. .well delivered
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I loved how you’ve described it. Your writings are beautiful. thank you so much for reading and an even greater gratitude for sharing these beautiful lines. ๐
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Dear Krati,
I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award.
Please check the other nominees they are profund writers
Just click the link below
https://kiranmag.wordpress.com/2016/09/24/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
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thank u so much. ๐ I feel really honored. ๐
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A day full of sweet surprises for me ๐๐
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These words just speaks the heart out
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thank you.. ๐
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