The words in bracket denote the thoughts.
she:- (I realized my love for you amidst all the ruckus and
chaos of the unruly world. I want to confess it now.. whisper
the chime of my feelings in your ears.. I have waited for this
day since a long time. Wondering every time what words in the
world can delineate what you mean to me.)
SHE-: heyy.. I’m eagerly waiting for the day when we
are meeting..!
HE:- me too..!! and I want to say something….
SHE:- WHAT? π
HE:- I want to tell you my love story. It’s a long one so
bear with me okay..!!
SHE:- I also wanted to say something.. But I guess not any
more. (tears rolled down the cheek, and evry thing seemed
hazy.. It was as if someone has sucked the life out of her
and suddenly it was a lethal abyss she was trapped in)
HE:- But why so. ?? Our bond was never this weak. We’ve
shared everything and anything. Then why won’t you tell.
SHE:- It won’t make any sense now..
HE:- But why won’t it?? I have always respected you and your
emotions.
SHE:- I forgot that there is a difference between respecting
and embracing…!
(May be my chimeric castle was meant to burn in the fire of
my agony)
That’s sad π These incomplete conversations also stop many relationships from starting.
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rightly said.. π
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It reminds me of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai movie shot….
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TBH…. yess…. even it reminded me of that…. But it’s a real incident.. someone shared so I donno… It was emotionally draining.. I thought I might just write..!
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In that case you should tell her that there are possibilities of something in this story..
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you feel so??? any possibilities.. !!
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I always feel so…even i tend to write stories with open end coz you never know what’s there in future!!
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umm… But this story sounded a tad hopeless… she tried confessing it indirectly and somewhat openly as well.. she did everything except yes the final confession.. So I suggested to move on and try to forget everything..!! May be it was never meant to be
But as of writing… I can give it another ending.. But life shall perhaps never do so..!
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Yeah! Somehow we are surrounded by fears of loosing things in real life unlike movies or stories but maybe she’ll get someone best & more deserving in future..crux is to live with positivity in life!!
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Yeahh… I told her the same..! it was just an ill fated love story.. !
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Not good having incomplete conversations who knows when they will meet.
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perhaps they were never meant to meet.. and some things are destined to remain incomplete.. !
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Yes.
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That’s sad.! Thoughtfully written. Keep it up ππ»
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yeah.. it was sad… Thank you so much..:)
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thank you so much π will try to acknowledge it asap. π
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Krati π¦
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not me sumit.. ! π
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:))
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That was painful π¦
Described beautifully (y)
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thank you.. π
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Sad! Sometime it happens but life gives everyone a fair opportunity…
thank you for following my blog Life iz Amazing ( sunnymca.wordpress.com ). I hope you have enjoyed my hindi poems π
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your poems are beautiful π thanks for stopping by and reading. π
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Oh really π thankuu
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yes really .. π welcome π
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It is sad how we expect others to know what we mean when we don’t tell it fully.
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Sometimes we don’t get a chance to say many things. Though we always try to convey in some way or another and at the end it’s just an I’ll fate that follows..!!
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