FOUND MYSELF
when I was lost in the labyrinth of solicitude and amore,
when the whole world looked not less than an ogre:
I found myself..
when the rosiness of oh so splendid life vanished;
I found myself…
When The eternal chase of defunct desires and dead dreams ended;
I found myself..
When I emptied my soul for the tremor in me could not longer be sustained;
I found myself…
When the delusion finally converged with it’s rationale;
I found myself..
When the colors of the resplendent painting faded:
I found myself…
When the battle got over and the courage got it’s cicatrix;
I found myself…
When the storm subsided and the destruction was peace;
I finally found myself…!
How do you’ll get such beautiful and difficult words in mind…….my English is a bit poor….nicely written but couldn’t understand and I won’t make an effort to open my dictionary 😜
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I know have been a tad verbose with this one.. but may be the words came out of intensity.. 🙂 thank u so much for your kind words.. 🙂
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Wow… wonderful
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thank u.. 🙂 🙂
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That’s a very beautiful and strong piece! Thank you for sharing!
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thank you so much… 🙂 🙂
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Nice poem
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thank u.. 🙂
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That’s Amazing.. As rainbow comes after the storm .. We find ourself in the hard times
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well said anshika.. 🙂 thanks for reading.. glad it resonates with you.. 🙂
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Thanks to you for sharing this beautiful write 🙂
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that’s all your magnanimity lady… 🙂 🙂 thank you.. 🙂
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That’s very kind of you to say that.. 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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That’s written so well. Intense.
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thanks puneet.. 🙂
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Welcome. 🙂
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Oh!! Beautifully carved verse..great work done👌👏
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thanks a lot prashantt.. 🙂
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I found myself blended with
found myself enamored with
found myself filled with
your amazing words and senses.
😀 😀 😛
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awwww… that’s soo sweet.. thak u so much for your kind words… 🙂 🙂
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Thanks to you, my neighbor for your lovely poem.. 😀
keep it up..!!
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you are being generous.. 🙂 but thank u… 🙂
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To praise good is not being generous.
Can’t agree.. 😦
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ohh it is.. !!!
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Lovely lines 😊👍🏼👌🏼
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thanks shefali.. 🙂
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It’s beautiful 👌
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thank u.. 🙂
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Sublime 😊
That’s a very nice way to discover your goodself
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thank you.. 🙂 ) glad it resonated. 🙂
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krati, may i ask” what is the difference between ‘i found myself’ and finally i found myself’ “
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well, just a matter of little emphasis.. !! haha.. !!
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oh.. i expected something more..
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really…!1 would love to know ua perspective.. 🙂
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shhhhhhhh
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for the first time I found your reply obscure
haha
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;)…
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Beaucoup de délicatesse… entre force et fragilité ! C’est beau…
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Je vous remercie . Vous avez un beau blog et vos mots sont magiques.
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Infiniment touchée !
Merciiii
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🙂 🙂
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This is so beautiful…
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thank you.. 🙂
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Kratzworld, thanks a million for sharing such a beautiful and marvellous poetry. Too good.
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Thank you so much for your generous words. 🙂
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“When the colors of the resplendent painting faded:
I found myself…
When the battle got over and the courage got it’s cicatrix;
I found myself…”
These are so beautifully written that I couldn’t stop admiring.
Each word and phrase is handpicked and so aptly placed that I’m awestruck! It’s always a pleasure reading your stuff Krati. This one is sheer brilliance! 🙂
Screw corporate world, it sucks! Go for writing poetry. You’ll rock!
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oh dear god… vipul your kind words and magnanimity levitate me… 🙂 🙂 thank u soo much for reading and these beautiful words.. 🙂 It really means a lot that u took the effort to read and comment and these words brought a smile .. 🙂 🙂
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No lady, it’s no magnanimity. I wrote exactly how I felt. There’s a reason why I visit your blog almost every day. Because it is a pleasure being here. And I think you are being magnanimous with such humble comments. Keep writing pieces like these and I’ll keep commenting. 😛
My best wishes! 🙂
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awwww…. thank u so much… 🙂 🙂 I wish there was a superlative of thank u, to express my gratitude. But I’d honor english language limitations. 😉
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I love this!
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thank you aanchal.. 🙂 🙂
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Lovely.
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Thank u.. 🙂
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Most Welcome Kratiji.
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Do you have any? Kindly let me recognize so that I may just subscribe.
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I have added a follow via e mail wigit :). You can check it out on homepage. 🙂 thank you
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Reblogged this on passionpoetblog and commented:
Wow ! That’s an amazing write …. You never told me you wrote poetry too. Awesome ! I’m glad you found yourself
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thank u so much.. 🙂 I am still not stuck to one genre and this is just one of the very few attempts.. 🙂 but thank u soo much for this.. 🙂 glad you liked it.. 🙂 🙂
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Yes I liked it much so especially being a poet for over 40 years. I have written over 5000 poems and songs and counting . Last year I decided to give them to the world and after reluctance I joined allpoetry.com. What fascinated me was there were so many people are were as good as me or better . What blew my mind was a lot of them were in school or early 20s and in different countries all over the world but most from India where I’ve become friends with many of them and it never would of happened if I wouldn’t of stepped out of my comfort zone
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that’s so great.. 🙂 you’re an inspiration … 5000 poems.. is huge.. 🙂 I can epitomize perseverance and hardwork in you.. 🙂 yes all these platforms give us an exposure.. here I came to know so many teenagers who write so well and even better.. 🙂
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Yes that’s what I’m trying to do is gain exposure. Same as you . Yes that was the first thing I noticed when I started exploring sites on poetry , songs and writing in general. What hurts me is I’m not computer savy. Look at my site . It’s not inviting the least bit. Haha. Don’t know how to navigate and set mine up. All I can do is post something. Thanks for the kind words and your time . Have a great night
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haha… ohh it’s not that tough.. 🙂 just google it and you shall find everything to jazz it up that too step by step.. I did the same.. 😉 you too have a great day/night 🙂
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Thank you for that. I didn’t know I could goggle it. Your first one to even give me that pointer. I did authorize my friend to help me earlier this year but haven’t heard from her since. She from India also . She excellent poetress . Tas mahal has included some of work in their magizine
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wow.. that’s awesome.. so much talent… 🙂
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Yes it is …Her name is Saumya Gupta
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Goodnight Kratz !
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Amazing one, you have a great vocab 🙂
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thanks a lot tech savvy girl.. 🙂 🙂
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Your welcome
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Very nice write-up. I definitely appreciate this website. Continue the good work!
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