ae zindagi… teri berooki ko ashkon me baha diya maine;
seher ke intazaar me chaand ko aaftab bana diya maine.
ranjhishe aaj bhi kaid hai dil ke kisi kone me;
unhi ke katro se apna aashiyana bana liya maine.
Ruswaa hain aaj bhi hum un andheri galiyon me,
jahan apna vajood kho chuke hum teri keher ke angaaron me.
ab na koi shikwa na gile hain,
har taraf ab gum ke silsile hain.
ae zindagi… teri berooki ko ashkon me baha diya maine.
Beautiful.. โบ๏ธ
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thank u.. ๐
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Welcome.
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เคเฅเคฐเคฆเคพเคฐ โ๐
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thank u.. ๐
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Amazingg ๐
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thank you.. ๐ ๐
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Absolutely fabulous!! Ab lagta hai hindi poetry ki baari hai๐๐
Whats next in your kitty..
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haha thanks… ๐ I guess more urdu… m addicted ๐ wbu?
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Haha..thats interesting.I write whatever comes in mind may be a travel writeup is my next(Ajmer & Pushkar).
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haha same here.. I develop a transitory penchant for somethings and I tend to overdo them.. ๐ then absolutely nothing
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Arrey!! You can also write about something very different(eatery,place etc.) of jaipur..like i don’t but Rajkachori of national handloom vaishali is my favorite… Haahaa
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haha ohh vaishaali is very far, I’ve hardly gone to that area….. but there is this place raja park here.. their raj kachori is like heaven.. u made me crave for it.. ๐ฆ
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Haha…thats least available here except in joints likd Haldirams or Bikanerwalas.You put up at that locality,i been very less to adarsh nagar or raja park area.
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yeah I do.. around that locality.. ๐ you’ve missed some awesome food then..make sure u visit next time.. it’s really lively and has a lot of food joints.. like a lot..
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Array! I am not aware of it though one of my friend put up near to Ramada but next time i’ll take your feed for food..i used to celebrate my new year at Jaipur from last 3 years๐
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hahah ohh sure.. I’m a foodie.. ๐ ๐
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Haha…same here alwaz welcome food! Yaar your blog alwaz reminds me of jaipur & my best buddies.Nice speaking to you๐
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hahah… nostalgia much..!
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Yeah!! You caught it right..haha
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เค เฅเคฟเคจเฅเคฆเคเฅ เคคเฅเคฐเฅ เคฌเฅเคฐเฅเคเฅ เคเฅ เค เคถเฅเคเฅเค เคฎเฅเค เคฌเคนเคพ เคฆเคฟเคฏเคพ เคฎเฅเคเคจเฅ
เคคเฅเคจเฅ เคเฅ เคญเคฐ เคเฅ เคฆเคฟเค เฅเคฎ เคซเคฟเคฐ เคญเฅ เคฎเฅเคธเฅเคเฅเคฐเคพ เคฆเคฟเคฏเคพ เคฎเฅเคเคจเฅ…
Awsmmmmm…work kriti…
Ye mera wala version tha.๐
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wooow… this one is great… quite optimistic and empowering… nice.. ๐ ๐
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Apko award diya gaya hai, Dheeraj ki hi idea hai, lekin meri site mein.
Please visit my site , for your lovely blogger award
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yes. Thank you so much.. ๐ it always feels very great when we uplift each other through this platform.. ๐ I shall do it asap.. ๐
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So nice…….
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thank u.. ๐
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My pleasure…..
You are so pretty
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thank you… ๐ ๐
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Matlab kamaal ho gaya yaar! Too good! ๐
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Shuqria !
Izzat afzai ka ๐
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Ab aap aise lafz likhengi to izzat afzaai ka mauqa hum to bilkul nahin chhodenge.. ๐
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hahah.. shukriya janab..!!
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Aakhir aapne Hindi mein Likh Hi Diya,
But Der Aaye Aur Masha-Allaha Khub Aaye,
Bahut Khub Kartiji,
” เคเคผเคฟเคเคฆเคเฅ เคจเฅ เค เคเฅเคเฅ-เค เคเฅเคเฅเค เคเฅ เคธเคฟเคเคพเคฏเคพ เคนเฅ เคฌเคนเฅเคค เคเฅเค.!
เคฏเฅ เคเคฐ เคฌเคพเคค ‘เคธเคพเคเคฐ’ เคเฅเค เคจเคพ เคธเฅเคเคจเคพ เคเคพเคนเฅเค เคนเคฐเคฆเคฎ.!! “
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apse behetar kaun likh sakta hai Hindi me Sagar Ji… Bhut shukriya Izzat afzai ka ๐
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Behtar Insaanon Ko Sabhi Behtar Dikhte Hain Kartiji,Aapne Hindi mein Likha Dekh/Padh Kar Bahut Khushi Huyi,Humari Bhasha Humari Feelings ko Jyada Achche se Bata/Samjha Sakti Hain.Aage Bi Yu Hi Likhte Raheingi Yahi Ummeed Hai Aapse.
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Bahut shukriya… Koshish jari rahegi.. ๐
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Itnzaar Rahega Kratiji.
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Hi Krati. Lovely Nazm. ๐ Keep it up.
https://kirdaarhusain.wordpress.com/
Hope you like it.
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thank you.. ๐ you write beautifully.. ๐
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Nice
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thank u.. ๐
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Zabardast ๐๐ป
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thank u.. ๐
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It’s truly amazing๐๐
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thank u so much.. ๐
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