NO.. it is not just another story, NO it is not drowned in the sea of prevalence, but it rose like the morning sun, so beautiful and full of warmth that you can feel the heat seep in every bit of your flesh. feel the fervor, the chasteness, the immaculacy of a lucid story delicately woven by the thread of passion.
THERE was a girl, pretty ordinary and simplistic. She used to live in a city which was away from the hustle and bustle. She was like a flightless bird who had wings but could not fly. Bestowed with beauty and grace the girl carried herself with dignity. Life was not a joyride for her, she had her own share of vicissitude and treachery and still managed to survive, rather live with an ever smiling face. Life was moving at its own pace entrapped in the quotidian humdrum.
One fine day someone entered her life. A guy from a metro city. The polished, refined and well-versed guy. he was not the perfect prince charming but there was a surreal beauty in his imperfection which appealed to each and every senses of the girl. He was charismatic and had the power to inspire. He was free, gallant and audacious. His sense of freedom made the girl tremor. they started talking, sharing and exploring. Together they reached fantasma and bliss in knowing each other. It was an inexplicable feeling. He gave her some of the most memorable lines that she could possibly gaze on for hours. They were poles apart just like fire and ice, they were near yet so far. they knew each other’s depths but still were strangers. And thatโs where the old rules that govern predicaments such as this came in; the opposites attract made much more sense now. The guy was rock hard and had a shield around him. For the world he was someone different but for her he was like a pleasing zephyrโฆ so gentle and sensitive.. She made an effort to see beyond the presented cuticle. It was a roller coaster ride from heaven to hell and the best part being the bond shared was so pious; serene; and pure that it didnโt require a name and perhaps a destination………
Wow.. Krati I loved it. ๐
It is go0d to read you after so long ๐
Br always happy and in touch.
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thanks sumi.. ๐ so glad to hear from you.. ๐ shall talk to u soon.. ๐ stay well.. ๐
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I shall wait for that Krati. Take care haan ๐
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Exquisitely written. ๐๐ผ
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thanks a lot mr. storyteller ๐
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Haha… Storyteller…
Welcome. ๐
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You are a better storyteller than me. You write long stories easily. I find that difficult.
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ohhh even I do…. but sometimes I get engrossed… the thing is I myself don’t like reading long stories now a days.. hahah so I love reading what u write only if u don’t keep a suspense at the end ๐
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Haha… So you don’t like suspense?
Well, writing a novel with approximately 40000 words and 15 chapters.. I find it one hell of a job. Seriously. ๐ฐ
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like i do like suspense… for the fact that it holds you.. but I like proper ending.. ๐ right.. I can never write a novel ever… I’m so sure..!! ๐
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Haha… Well, even I don’t know if I can complete it but dearly want to give it a try.
What does this line implies “like I do like suspense… For the fact that it holds you.”?
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I meant that suspense motivates you to read.. as in it holds you throughout to read..! ๐
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Yup agreed.
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Great ๐ comment puneet..
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Thank you. โบ๏ธ
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This is amazing. I could relate to this.
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ohh really.. ๐ ๐ thanks a lot.. ๐
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Loved the story! Well portrayed the love! You are good in illustrating things well
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aww.. thank u so much for reading.. ๐ ๐ glad u liked it.. ๐
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Hmmm.. really good ๐.. love โค๏ธ the words(adjectives) used to describing her situation..
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thanks wendy.. ๐ ๐ it’s great to hear this from you.. ๐
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Oooooh my.. You really got toasted… ..but as long as you had great fun
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๐๐woww
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thank you amogh.. ๐
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Wow!! Beautifully expressed…I love the way you use adjectives..perfect!!
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thanks a lot zeny.. โค ๐
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Superbly written and wonderfully expressed.
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thank you.. ๐
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Great work batwomen!! i like the way its short & crisp out of complexities.Keep writing
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thanks batman.. ๐ ๐ you’re always encouraging.. ๐
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Your welcome ๐
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Splendida giornata โค
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grazie ๐
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So beautifully written. Loved it.
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thank you.. ๐
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It was a great read! lovely!!
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thank you… ๐ ๐
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Captivated me in the first paragraph, maybe you would like to try some of my stories?
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thank you so much.. I would love to read your stories ๐ ๐
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No problem
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Such a lovely story. ๐
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thank you ๐
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