SHE: you know the reason why I never leave you?
HE: what is it?
SHE: because I know, if I ever leave.. you won’t stop me. Not even once. You might not even care to ask why are you leaving and you’ll let me go easily like a sand you hold in your fists and the moment you let it even slightly loose, it falls. You will not stop me.
HE: if leaving makes you happy then go ahead.
SHE: I lied. I lied every time when I said I don’t expect anything from you. I lied when I said I can live without you. I lied when I said I was happy. I do expect and I expect a lot, but you know what… If everyone fulfilled expectations then there would have been no miseries, no tears, no melancholy only happiness….!! how imperfect that world would be..!!!!
It was so aptly written. Beautiful!! Unsaid words though.
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yeah unsaid.. π but thak u so much π π
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Wow…
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thank you.. π
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Heart wrenching writeup. Words showing the pain.
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thanks a lot puneet.. π glad u liked it.. π
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Welcome. βΊοΈ
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Arre!! Itna pain…whose story is this Krati..beautifully portrayed expressionsπππ
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ahh.. not a story…. just the part of a series .. π glad you could sense the pain though..!!!
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Hmm..i guess all ingradients of emotions except comedy in upcoming posts..kitni lambi hai yeh storyππ
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hahah this is not a story.. story toh I ended.. π this is just tiny bits and pieces which have a story… π they are totally independent.. π comedy to abi nahi for sure… especially when I’m very gloomy and in hemingway mode ..!!
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Haahaa…listen there is a online writing platform for short stories where I used to publish,you can publish yours and get the effective feedbacks alongwith other competitions too.Its very useful.
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OHHH what z it ??
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Post it on yourstoryclub.com
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anyone can post theirs’s??
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Yes,actually you’ll have to submit your story to them and after thier assessment they publish…try out,its very helpful.
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ohhh.. do they edit it as well.. ??
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No,but you’ll get proof editing option when you’re posting on it.It is a venture in collab with wordpress only so almost every function is similar to it.
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ohh.. thanks a lot.. π π
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My pleasure & bdw do you really sleep or notππππ
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π¦ π¦ i DO… a lot…. but when the whole world’s awake.. I sleep…haha
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Haahaa….real Batwomen!!ππ
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u as well… π batman
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I normally sleeps for 3-4 hrs only…writing my drafts from last some 3-4 months,used to sleep between 1-2ππ
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OMG.. I wish even I Could sleep for only 3-4.. !! I sleep for 7-8,,/ π¦
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Job on head..no optionπ―
Similar was my routine during college..so enjoyπ
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Splendous! So beautifully written!
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thank u so much.. π π
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Wonderful and sad at the same time.
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thank u… π π
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That’s nicely done Kratz. You penned this piece to perfection!
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thank u so much robert.. π always happy to hear from you .. π
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Your so welcome dear. Awww .. You made my day saying that. What you doing up so late. Did I wake you up. I’m sorry if I did
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ohh no… I usually sleep late. π
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What time is it there
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2:00 AM…!
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Oh okay. I thought it was later . It’s 3:25 here in the afternoon. I’m still in bed . Haha
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You have email address
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yes I do.
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Here mine … RGL111062@YAHOO.COM. I can send you my writing and pics of books you might like to have
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sure… π
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Thanks dear
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What’s yours
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kratiarora75@gmail.com
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You got mail
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yeah
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You send to me ?
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I did revert to yours
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Yes I just found it in my email. Sorry I been away . How is everything going with you
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hey.. it’s ok.. not an issue.. π I’m fine … hope you’re doin good too… π have a nice day.. π
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I’m doing good
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It’s 3 am
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Thank you much!
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oh,.. the sweetest definition of imperfection…
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Thanks akhila.. π and nice dp :). Your comment made way to the sapam box which is quite unusual..!
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normally i do with my laptop. bu last time it was with my phone.. may be that’s why it entered into spam.. anyway comments are very often spammed nowadays in WP
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yeah… reminds me to check my spam box more often..!!
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HAPPY WEEK β€
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thank u.. π β€ same to you π
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Yin and yang is what world is made up of. If all is good or all is wrong, there would be no point of loving it. π
I admire my life, or anybody’s life cause of the fact that it’s a mixture. Though this mixture imbalances itself, at times. But nothing lasts forever. If not happiness, then neither sadness.
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you’ve summed up so well… everything which I was trying to convey… π thanks a million for sharing your perspective here and your beautiful words are always a pleasure to read.. π
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You wrote it that well.ππ
Thank you so much!βΊ
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thanks to you rather aditi.. π π
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That is so sweet and beautifully written!!!
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thank you so much π π
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Woah! That’s a lot touching!!!
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thank you so much π
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