TONIGHT, darling let’s get drowned in our oh so messianic ocean; we’ll forget it all and get soaked in the droplets of aphrodisiac, among the smog of wreck.
let’s set this forlorn lump of heart on fire, make it feel something.. I susurrate in your ears those magical words, while we lie down gazing the dark clouds etiolate the moon.TONIGHT, let the stark darkness hide our cicatrix and the rhythmic pulse be the lullaby to get us to hibernate and rescue us from the pandemonium.
TONIGHT, let me string together my words into a curio, while I feel the warmth of your exhalation.
TONIGHT DARLING LET US FIND AN ESCAPE. . . . . . .
Oooooh such a delightful poem
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thanks a lot wendy.. 🙂 🙂
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Good poem. You really dip into your imagery with this one. I imagine a string quartet playing a dramatic piece to this.
Good work.
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thank u so much for your very generous words.. 🙂 🙂
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Smiling huge 😁
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Nice one!😄
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thank you.. 🙂 ❤
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romantic escape…
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it is.. 😉 😉 thanks for reading.. 🙂
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Awesome write ! ☺ So romantic. I thought I was only one who wrote like that. Oh how wrong can be…
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thank u 🙂 🙂
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Your welcome Kratz ☺😊☺
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Happy Weekend ❤
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thank you 🙂 ❤
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Quite beautiful and romantic. 🙂
*closes the dictionary*
P.S. Your vocab is out of the world, I mean too good. :O
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haha.. in this I got a tad verbose.. otherwise vocab has been an Achilles’ heel for long..!!!! pheww..!! constant thriving to improve..! none the less, thank u so much for reading and your very kind words.. 🙂 🙂
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I think that is good. Experimenting and learning.
Come on, you don’t have to be soooo generous. Your vocab is brilliant. I have couple too many of your posts and I can vouch for it.
You’re welcome. 😀
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thank you.. 🙂 🙂 🙂 haha generosity has to be requited with generosity.. 😉
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Touche. Hands down, Can’t really argue with that. :).
Remember, I told you, Good at Vocab? This. 😀
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hehe… 🙂 🙂
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🙂
Shouldn’t you be sleeping? :O
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ehh,,,, nope… isn’t same for ya 😛
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Why not? :O
No, I don’t sleep so early. 😛
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same here..!
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Whattt?
Haven’t slept yet?
I replied after a gap of half an hour assuming you would sleep and I’d win my imaginary contest.
Is anything keeping you up?🤔
Or is it someone? 🤔😜
You know “According to research, girls who sleep early have longer life, study well and are always happy”. You have to sleep now. 😜
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haha…. I did sleep by the time you replied this…!! well it’s my studies keeping me up… it’s all online that I was studying.. so had wordpress on..! none the less, I didn’t know there are many night owls.. !! hahah
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Well, I finally win. 😜
Yeah, right. “Studies”.
I see. So studies, huh!
Well, now you know. 😊
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Lovely.
Happy Bhai Dooj & Dipawali To U & Your Whole Family.
Always Stay Happy.
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thank u.. 🙂 wish the same for you.. 🙂 stay happy
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Welcome & Thanks Krati ji.
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Beautiful work 💐
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thank you.. 🙂
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Loved it.
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thank you.. 🙂 🙂
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very nice
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thank u.. 🙂 🙂
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Beautiful words..
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Thanks for reading and stopping by Krishna.. 🙂
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Mesmerizing!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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thank u shreya.. 🙂
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WoW!!! intense……sensual…….beautiful……loved it! 🙂 🙂
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It’s so Romantic. A beautiful poem Kratz!
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Lovely ❤
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thanks kavita.. I shall definitely offer all the support I can, would be happy to help.. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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pleasure… 🙂
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This is so deep and beautiful 🙂
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thank you so much.. 🙂 🙂
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