I left the dreary paths of nothingness,
I flew above the hollowness.
All my sorrows entangled in gloom,
Hid behind the dark side of the moon.
The brightness of the fire,
Embellished my whole attire.
All the devils got burned
for the dark side of the moon held them discerned.
I continue to sit beachside my thoughts,
trying to join all the dots.
The tears and fears got vanished,
abaft the dark side of the moon they lie banished.
Love it krati :* keep it up 🙂
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Thank u so so so much aish.. :* :*
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Well expressed. Especially loved the reference of fire and devils getting burned. 🙂
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Thanks a lot nitin… 🙂 🙂
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I love the poetic qualities you used in the poem. Nice one.
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Thank you so much… 🙂 🙂
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You are welcome.
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🙂 🙂
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I never thought about the moons dark side before,…..I love stars more than moon…..
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May be you should… the moon is as beautiful as stars… and has a brighter side too… 🙂 🙂
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But I love stars ……and gazing them….. i like a mystery they hold beneath them
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True.. 🙂 it’s beautiful to gaze at stars sometimes.. 🙂
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nice poem…
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Thanks a lot.. 🙂
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Thanks a lot dhiraj.. 🙂 🙂
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Wow – your words belongs to musical melody…
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That’s so sweet of you to say that.. 🙂
Thanks a lot for reading. 🙂
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I wish I came up with something like this. Poignant! 😛
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Sorry, wrong emoticon. I meant this – 🙂
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naaay naay… now don’t u say a word… you write far better poems..!!
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Since you have said this two times now, let me clarify. When it comes to using beautiful and emotionally provoking adjectives, metaphors and allegories, you are mind blowing. Coming up with such splendid phrases is not easy and I know it.
So, in short, I really meant it when I said “I wish I came up with something like this”.
Keep going! 🙂
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hahah…. you’re really generous and sweet.. It was a pleasue reading your views on so many posts.. 🙂 thank u so much
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My pleasure! 🙂
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