why……

lost

why everything feels damaged.
Why constantly weeping eyes leave you empty and lifeless.
Why there is darkness so dense that you see no light.
Why the misery drowns you in a lethal abyss.
Why is there no hope.
Why does the life become an eternal void.
Why is failure so defined.
Why do we lose even before the battle starts.
Why the thorns of life make us bleed so profusely and leave us lifeless.
Why the dark thunderous clouds cover the sky.
Why the storm never subsides.
Why is there no sunshine. . . .. . .

39 thoughts on “why……”

  1. Shouldn’t the first line be ‘ why everything feels damaged’? but you know better what you wanted to write.
    Nice poem otherwise.👍
    I’d suggest deleting this comment after you read it, if you wish.

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    1. hey I rectified it. Thank u so much. I really appriciate that u pointed it out. If I accept all the praise, then why not any suggestions and that too constructive. 🙂 thanks for reading. and of course I never delete any such comments. I find it even better, as they say to err is human. 🙂

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  2. Bcoz of law of nature or karma.. everything also so destined to be happening while lesser mortals pass through these ” WHYs ” totally ignorant n clueless! At times the relative prospective at looking at things creates more ” WHYs” , a beautiful search through words.Amazing! Blessings.

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      3. Well! I hope you are wrong and I’m sure I’ll be there when the clouds disappear to show you the clear sky.
        But, you know, these black clouds, they do bring out the poets in all of us, don’t they? Sad, but true! 🙂

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      5. Whatever it is, I hope it gets over soon. But, it will, believe me. There’s a beautiful song called “There’s never a forever thing” by A-h. Blissful music and beautiful lyrics. I hope it gives you strength ’cause it works for me 🙂

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