For once I want to feel the happiness.
For once I want to do away with the glumness.
For once I want to feel the pain subside.
For once I want to just hide.
For once I want to seek solace
For once I want to lower the pace.
For once I want to fly high
For once I wish to touch the sky.
For once I want to break the rhyme
For once i want to shine.
For once I want to get detached
For once I don’t want to get trashed.
For once I want to forget
For once I don’t want to regret.
Bfully put down. Love every word as it comes straight from the heart. π
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Thank you soo much, afterall a beautiful person can see beauty in others…:) π π
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We know that βI love youβ is easy to say but difficult to prove yet we still fall for mere words and complain when we are hurt
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Great thought.. π thanks a lot fir sharing it here imran.. π
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Allk the very best
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AIIK ??
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Ha-ha all*… Grr this phone
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heheh.. thanks a lot martian.. π
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Come to Marsππ
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mars ?
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Yes the planet
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ha-ha sure.. would love to go mars.. π
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You are welcome
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Love that!
When you say “For once I want to break the rhyme” it reminds me of the first verse of ‘Stressed Out’ by Twenty One Pilots:
“I wish I found some better sounds no one’s ever heard,
I wish I had a better voice that sang some better words,
I wish I found some chords in an order that is new,
I wish I didn’t have to rhyme every time I sang,”
I think you said it first, though – right? π
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Heyy… This is interesting… π thanks for bringing it to my notice… π
PS:- can I know your name.. π
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Sorry – my name is Robert – pleased to meetcha Krati.
Check the About menu on my blog – it’s all there. π
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Checked it already… π
Pleased to meet ya too robert.. π π
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And I never felt a thing!! π
Likewise fuh sure.
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Haha.. π dang.. π
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Since when was ‘dang’ any kind of a Hindi word?! π
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Dang is English.. :O. Not hindi.
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True enough. Thought you were Indian – ‘pologies π
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Yeh.. I am an indian.. But I know you are not.. So using hindi won’t make sense.. π
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Bahot atcha Kratiben. π
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You know hindi??? π±
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Tora tora. π
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HAhahah.. u mean thoda thoda.. as in little bit.. π that’s cool man.
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Thanks Krati. I’ve only ever said thoda thoda out loud so have no idea of the spelling. π
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Hehe ….. you’ve been to India?
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Not for a while – but about 15 times in all? Mainly to the north/west side.
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Heyyy. 15 times. I livein the western side… in rajasthan. I don’t live in a metro city but if you’re the one who enjoys the view of some royal historic monuments & a tad bit scenic natural beauty.. than i’d fondly host ya. π
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I’ve spent some time in Abu Parvat. There’s some lovely scenery up there, and some fantastic views of the plains down below! Plenty of temples and historic stuff too – it’s great!
Is that anywhere near you? π
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Yeh… it’s Pretty near… you’ve visited jaipur?
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Probably went through it on the sleeper from Delhi to Abu Road, but might have been asleep – sorry!
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Ohhh… that’s my bad…. next time may be.
I am not that bad a host u see
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You show all the signs of being a very good host Krati – I’m very impressed by your poise, knowledge, sense of humour and writing skills. Your English is impeccable and your openness a credit to you.
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Thanks Robert.. π leaving all the humility.. I shall acknowledge this as a big compliment… :). And a compliment on my writing skills.. That too from a novelist in making. :D. Feel levitated.. π
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I’m just learning. π
I just happen to be learning by writing is all.
Yeah – it’s all true about you though. π
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Even I am a greenhorn in writing.. Just started giving it all the more time only in past few months.. π I too hope I learn and grow… There is no end to it… :).
PS:- don’t you ever say that you have a tough time being humble.
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Humble? Nah – that’s just plain old lack-of-self-respect with a big dollop of self deprecating, negative self-talk. π
You will learn and grow in whatever you put the time and effort into. I sense that you are a giant of the literary world in the making. π
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Ohh dear… You are kind and inspiring.. π hahah loved the way you described humble.. :D. Your literary skills are on fleek.. π
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Why that’s very kind of you Krati! My eyebrows are looking particularly nice too! π
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